My story

This is my story that I started to write at home last year. It's about two friend's that like hunting and fishing.  it took me about two years to get this far in this story i have one more that I am writing now. This story is the long year.  Please enjoy it. 

The Long Year

Sam and Jack started to walk out of school, Sam is in the same class as Jack.

Jack is 25 years old, he has a house size of a ship and a car that Sam uses all the time. Sam doesn't have a car so she uses Jacks.

Sam is two year younger  than Jack she is 23 years old. Sam has a baby Brother, and a younger Sister called Nicky and Ben.

“Jack do you want to come over to night and look after my Sister and Brother, and I’ll be there ,’’ ask Sam. “ Why not I’ll come and mark Nicky’s homework and  I make a little toy for Ben to play with, ’’ said Jack.

After a few hours later Jack came with his his old toys what he had when he was a kid. Sam Mum and dad was going to a pub and they won’t be back at two in the morning. so Sam is baby sitting.

“Hi Jack said said Sam's dad Sam is inside waiting for you.” When Jack went inside Sam wasn’t doing her homework but it look like at she cut she hand with a knife in the kitchen. “SAM ! shouted Jack are you all write.” Jack  ran to Sam's side and crad a first aid kit. Sam just stand in the kitchen like she was stone by not talking and don’t have a knife in her hand. Sam was pranking him so Jack walked up to Sam’s room and knock on her door and wait for Sam to open her door. A few minutes later Sam open the the door laughing so much that she fall over on the floor. “SAM!” Yelled Jack. Still laughing Jack started to laugh to Sam’s long hair blocking her eyes. “Got you good “said Sam going in the kitchen and grading her toy self to prank Jack and Jack fall for it good.

“ So Sam why did you prank me?’’asked Jack.

“Cause it was funny and I knew you  would take it,”said Sam. So they walk into the living room to see that Ben watching TV and Nick doing her homework  and watching TV at the same time.Jack handed his toy to Ben so Sam can put the TV on music and Jack help Nick do her homework and that got her work finish sooner. Sam started to cut some apple for Ben and Jack started to cut some fish up ,steak and chips. At six  o'clock tea was finished Jack made Sam fish and chips to take his homework off his mind.

Jack asked”, Sam can I use your computer so I can do my homework.”

“Why not I’m not going to use it and I’m finished my homework in my room,”said Sam going in her room and get her computer. Jack started to finish his homework and put Sams computer on charge and started to go to the kitchen to make his tea. Nicky was starting to go to her room with some string in her hand. “What!”said Nicky. “What are you doing?’’ Said Jack cutting chips and stick that he having for tea. Sam was in her room on youtube on withing Jack one got away in Postion a good eating fish and he drop his rod in the sea.  Sam was laughing so hard that she fainted on her bed. Jack could hear no laughing from Sam’s room he started to walk up to Sam’s room. He knock on her door but there was no replied so he made a call to the doctor to come and help her.

After the long night Jack asked Sam what was her Mum and Dad doing. “Sorry Jack there going on holiday for the whole week so we’ll be taking Nicky to school,”said Sam.

“Why I have work all week but if I go and put her up in morning and head to work,”said Jack.

“Ok who is going to put her up at the end of school?”said Sam.

The next end day later. Jack started to get work talking Nicky was a bad idea because he have to get up at 5 am  for work and  she be there at 7. Sam started to say “How are you going to get to work a when it start at 7.00.’’

Jack goes hunting every night and he goes fishing every morning.

On the news there was a crash on the side of the road. If Sam mum and dad don’t come back in another week they are dead. Sam wasn’t sew if Nicky and ben will be going to living with Jack and Sam in the same house. Sam started to get mocked because she 24 year old and she is still at school.

In one week Jack is going buch for a few weeks and leaving Sam to look after she sister and brother all by herself. “Sorry Sam I have  to go to get a an job now,”said Jack walking out of the house and taking his guns and fishing staff in his hands.

“ Jack? You don’t need a job you just can go fishing and hunting here,”exclaimed Sam.

“You’re right Sam. I can go fishing how want to go fishing now?”asked Jack.

Jack was going to get a job with fishing and hurting and do the fishing all two weeks and hunting for 4 weeks and Jack is going to start next year when Ben is a little older.